EXT-
Jamil’s House- Afternoon
Jamil entering his house- walking
Cut
to:-
INT-
Jamil’s House- Afternoon
Jamil enters his house only to realise
that his house is in a mess, he then calls for his younger brother Asif who he
expects to be home. There is no reply.
Jamil-
Asif!… are you home? (Looking up the stairs)
Cut
to:-
INT-
Jamil’s House- Afternoon
Jamil receives a phone call, he observes
who it’s from and to his relief sees it is from his brother Asif, he
immediately picks up, asks where he is only to find out it’s not his brother
but is his kidnapper. The voice on the phone then explains to Jamil how to
retrieve his brother.
Jamil –
Where are you? ...
Antagonist –
I’m afraid your brother’s
not available right now
If you want him
back there are a few conditions I need
you to
follow.
Jamil –
Listen yeah,
if you do anything to my brother I’ll kill you.
Antagonist –
Hey, hey,
relax, your brother will be fine as long as you
follow my
conditions.
Jamil –
(stays quiet
and listens)
Antagonist –
Bring the
Wayne Enterprise Business Contract, which
you’ve just
inherited from your father, Ill text you the
address of where I’m holding your
brother.
Jamil –
Alright but as
long as nothing happens to my brother
Antagonist –
Oh don’t worry he’ll be
fine, just fine (sarcastic tone)
Jamil hangs up the phone and stands
still for a moment, distraught by what he has to do, wondering whether to do it
or not. He then hurries to his room searches for all the paperwork associated
with the contact, puts it all in a bag, takes a deep breath, and then hurries
out of the room down the stairs and out of his house.
Cut
to:-
Ext-
Bus Stop- Afternoon
Jamil crosses the road and walk towards
the bus stop. He then gets on the bus.
Cut
to:-
INT-Bus-
Afternoon
Jamil is in the bus looking at a picture
of his brother on his phone.
Cut
to:-
EXT-
Bus Stop- Afternoon
Jamil gets off the bus and walks towards
antagonist’s location. Then he opens the door and enters.
Cut
to:-
INT-
Antagonist’s Location- Afternoon
Jamil walks down a long corridor and
meets some stairs. Walks up the stairs and eventually reaches a door to the
room of which his brother is held hostage within. He enters the room and
witnesses his brother struggling with his face covered and a figure with a mask
on standing beside him. The antagonist then pulls out a gun puts it on the head
of the hostage and warns Jamil. He points the gun at Jamil.
Antagonist –
Alright let’s do this quick, your
brother’s
going to be alright as long as you have what
I have
asked for
Jamil –
I have your
damn contract, so just let my brother go
now
Antagonist –
Now that
we have got an understanding of each other,
walk to the table
put the contract down, sign it and
walk away slowly, and
then ill free your brother,
simple.
Jamil walks towards the table gets the
contract out of his bag and places it on the table, signs it…
Jamil –
Now let
him go!
Antagonist grabs the contract hits Jamil
on the head with the gun, which knocks him off his feet and runs out the room.
Jamil gains his conscious, takes off the bag from the head of the hostage and
then finds out it’s not his brother. Jamil then runs out of the room and spots
the antagonist, he chases him. The antagonist shoots back at Jamil but Jamil
takes cover. This is until the antagonist runs out Ammunition. Jamil starts
chasing the antagonist and eventually they reach the car park, where the car of
the antagonist is parked. Jamil then catches up with him, takes him to floor
and takes the mask off. Which then to his sheer disbelief witnesses his
brother’s face behind the mask.
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